Monday, August 12, 2013

Ian's Birthday by Josh B

On Saturday I went to Ian's birthday and we went to 10 pin bowling. Ian got heaps of spares. I almost got a strike but there was only 1 pin on the ground. I had only 94 points on the board. Ian had 100 points at the start. Bailey or Claudia was winning.and then me and Ian  got two spares. I almost bet Ian but he had six more  points than me. Me and Bailey thought that Ian was going to win 10 pin bowling.

1 comment:

Room 7 Brightwater School said...

Hi Josh B
It's Darby here

WOW! what an awesome day you had.
I liked the way you named the people that went to the party.
I liked the way you also added in the points.
You could've described what the lane were like and who took you to ten pin bowling.

By Darby