On sunny Saturday we had some friendly visitors come.The friendly visitors were Ursula and her fantastic step daughters. We had lots of fantastic FUN!!!!!!!!!!!.Their names were Maddy and Emma. Maddy was 6 years old and she was the oldest. Emma was 4 years old,(Almost five) she is the youngest. First we painted our raggy nails to perfect, sparkly new ones.Then we teamed up. I was with Emma. We did ballet together and she listened to my piano playing and danced to it. She was a very good one. Then it was time to go home.they hugged me and did as they were told. I was very sad when they went but it was still a lovely, sunny day!!!!
3 comments:
Hi Ameera
Room 7 really likes the describing words you have used (adjectives), the great sentence starters and Helena really liked the detail about the sparkly nails. Sam says you have got lots of good writing. Keighley really liked the punctuation you used. GREAT ONE Ameera!
Love your story Ameera. Great use of words. Love Mumxxx
sup Ameera its Helena here you wright good storys. I love the bold word .
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